tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post7727932720942810092..comments2023-11-14T11:23:22.796-06:00Comments on JUST BETWEEN ME AND YOU: Would You Keep Reading?Grandma Yellow Hairhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10917551672825097342noreply@blogger.comBlogger34125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-17912944755686400362011-03-22T15:08:26.532-05:002011-03-22T15:08:26.532-05:00BRAVO!! and YES I would continue to read this book...BRAVO!! and YES I would continue to read this book..in fact I want and need more of it..Hugs and smiles Gl♥riaHappy To Be/ Gl♥riahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17515180398559277746noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-68706791607447197892011-03-22T10:33:54.400-05:002011-03-22T10:33:54.400-05:00You bet! That is excellent and I'd love to re...You bet! That is excellent and I'd love to read more.Debbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17480046958714954128noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-79212738655723903202011-03-21T20:14:34.695-05:002011-03-21T20:14:34.695-05:00Maggie!! & you are a writer too! I have to a...Maggie!! & you are a writer too! I have to admit a little secret but I want you to take it as a huge compliment...I couldn't read it! It was too scary & for some reason when I am pregnant I can't handle scary! But the reason I couldn't go on was because I already had so many emotions in the first paragraph! It scrared the witts out of me! Keep it up my friend! & someday when I am not pregnant I want to come back & read the whole thing!<br /><br />-your nutty little sister :) <br />LibLibbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04707633636581398829noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-10270149342512361092011-03-21T16:15:45.772-05:002011-03-21T16:15:45.772-05:00Well, Maggie, you've caught my attention.
Awai...Well, Maggie, you've caught my attention.<br />Awaiting the arrival of Chapter 2.<br />Hugs,<br />GerryGerryARThttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10730757811478587648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-28231485536092914252011-03-21T14:43:11.837-05:002011-03-21T14:43:11.837-05:00I love it Maggie!
You have a gift for storytellin...I love it Maggie!<br /><br />You have a gift for storytelling and I feel like I know all the main characters already (especially the father, my Dad was a preacher).<br /><br />Thanks so much for stopping by. I've been working on my house and have kind of let my novel fall by the wayside, but I am working on a new chapter and also will have a chapter on the ongoing saga of building my house later in the week...<br /><br />xxoo,<br /><br />RMWRocky Mountain Womanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17873112978518614362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-49393404644253188952011-03-21T13:33:41.215-05:002011-03-21T13:33:41.215-05:00I am a complete murder mystery fan and I love what...I am a complete murder mystery fan and I love what you wrote. I would definitely keep reading it! You're fantastic.<br /><br />Take care.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-1412015825849397382011-03-21T11:32:07.256-05:002011-03-21T11:32:07.256-05:00Girl, ya can't just leave us danglin' out ...Girl, ya can't just leave us danglin' out here...you MUST post another!!!<br /><br />God bless and enjoy this beautiful Summer Day! :o)Nezzy (Cow Patty Surprise)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10175389676508928061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-41859177502063174362011-03-20T22:04:30.944-05:002011-03-20T22:04:30.944-05:00Maggie, even though I no longer read Mystery books...Maggie, even though I no longer read Mystery books, ( I used to years ago), you can grab the reader's attention and hold it. I like how develop your story. You're good... real good... Go for it Maggie. <br /><br />Happy Spring. JBJuliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03423754263165266554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-11331594618088228322011-03-20T21:56:45.753-05:002011-03-20T21:56:45.753-05:00Thank you from the bottom of my heart for taking t...Thank you from the bottom of my heart for taking the time to read this long chapter and for leaving me such awesome comments. Wow I really am lost for words when it comes to telling you how much I appreciate each and everyone of you..<br />Signed copies for all of you!!!! lol<br />Love to all and blessing for a wonderful week ahead!<br />MaggieGrandma Yellow Hairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10917551672825097342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-91910596250294902962011-03-20T19:23:33.180-05:002011-03-20T19:23:33.180-05:00Heck ya!
Remember us when you are all famous and s...Heck ya!<br />Remember us when you are all famous and stuff!<br /><br />You are pretty creative my friend.Welcome to the Garden of Eganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10132446191608085958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-53145289433471189302011-03-20T17:55:06.001-05:002011-03-20T17:55:06.001-05:00Maggie,
MOST DEFINITELY I would keep reading...not...Maggie,<br />MOST DEFINITELY I would keep reading...not only does it lure me in but I smile because I hear your voice in the story and that is fun to me! I think you need to continue and post your next chapter...<br />Hugs my friend!Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12795817810030681267noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-20982389519510955862011-03-20T16:54:36.385-05:002011-03-20T16:54:36.385-05:00This has the makings of a real thriller. A profile...This has the makings of a real thriller. A profiler would love your lead in character. Does he fulfill his dream? <br />Do hope you keep working on that story. You do have a definite talent for writing.Arkansas Pattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14156004753267665579noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-51990733848083528902011-03-20T12:41:44.231-05:002011-03-20T12:41:44.231-05:00Yes, it's good! I like mysteries and your sty...Yes, it's good! I like mysteries and your style of writing. Want to hear more!Pamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02158336083462589188noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-75158176873683491642011-03-20T09:59:11.201-05:002011-03-20T09:59:11.201-05:00Maggie, darling, this is one fantastic write. Spel...Maggie, darling, this is one fantastic write. Spell binding, mysterious, captivating ... you can't stop here, sweetie ... keeping those keys going!!! <br /><br />Andrea is a well rounded marvelous woman, Maggie, she'll enjoy this awesome talent you have ...<br /><br />Calling you today sometime ... love & miss you!<br /><br />Have a beautiful week ~<br />TTFN ~ <br />Love,<br />MarydonAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05697196986038110683noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-41192717205939959042011-03-20T09:55:08.476-05:002011-03-20T09:55:08.476-05:00I like your writing style...I would definately rea...I like your writing style...I would definately read it...wow how cool if you sell it and we could say we knew you when...Debhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11745604261113221887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-89375469371599163872011-03-19T22:54:42.645-05:002011-03-19T22:54:42.645-05:00Well, first, you have a natural knack for storytel...Well, first, you have a natural knack for storytelling: rhythm, timing, how to command attention. Love, love, love, the opening of the first chapter. Your writing is a joy to read because its so conversational and you have such a lovely combination of action and character description. You REALLY want to know what's going to happen next, and right from the start.<br /> <br />What really works, what's so artfully done, is you effortlessly grab attention, set the tone, and introduce your characters so naturally...its beautiful...really...that try to teach that to graduate students, but you either have or you don't. And, You, Maggie, HAVE IT!!!<br /> <br />Continue on...<br />Love from your neighbor<br />GretchenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-66865860309620810892011-03-19T22:52:15.906-05:002011-03-19T22:52:15.906-05:00I would definitely read more! I think it's gre...I would definitely read more! I think it's great Maggie. Please keep going and share more. As to whether or not this should be the first chapter, you would know better. It certainly caught my interest, which is what the beginning of a book is supposed to do. Thanks for sharing!Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16454925115428994669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-62911763602090693762011-03-19T22:41:36.962-05:002011-03-19T22:41:36.962-05:00I'm NOT a murder mystery kinda girl...but YOU ...I'm NOT a murder mystery kinda girl...but YOU done it!! It's a page turner for sure, Maggie!! Write more.Donnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13063538863025012110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-81079818893664365912011-03-19T21:45:22.943-05:002011-03-19T21:45:22.943-05:00Hi Maggie,
For sure keep writing and I really hop...Hi Maggie,<br /><br />For sure keep writing and I really hope that you get published.<br />I think we all like to read a thriller and mystery book. Best of luck and we hope to see your books in the shops.<br /><br />Enjoy the rest of the weekend<br />Hugs<br />CarolynDraffin Bearshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01448539647442095635noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-41307950855055523852011-03-19T21:16:06.491-05:002011-03-19T21:16:06.491-05:00Hi Maggie, You sure know how to leave a person han...Hi Maggie, You sure know how to leave a person hanging. I was waiting for more to read. Yours would be hard to lay down once you starting reading. I like a good book and I would like to read more of this one. Your typewriter reminded me of typing class many moons ago. Have a great weekend. Your Missouri Friend.Shirleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06648865214694535566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-6751187583365718982011-03-19T20:58:19.387-05:002011-03-19T20:58:19.387-05:00Hey Maggie, when will you get it published so we c...Hey Maggie, when will you get it published so we can read the rest??? You know I'm the wife of a cop, so of course I love mysteries, crime, etc. I don't get to read much anymore, except blogs, but I want you to sign my copy!!!!<br />hugs to you..Junehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17283259375743586344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-76338980114888429762011-03-19T20:44:15.261-05:002011-03-19T20:44:15.261-05:00I think you might really have something here. The...I think you might really have something here. The story line is a good one. I think you should go ahead and post a bit more. Are you waiting until it is finished before editing? At any rate, I'm looking forward to reading more.<br /><br />Love to you!Darlenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16797132860053426517noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-75077949100361593172011-03-19T20:20:38.460-05:002011-03-19T20:20:38.460-05:00I am impressed! Keep going! :) I have always wa...I am impressed! Keep going! :) I have always wanted to write but the stories always sound better in my head. lol<br /><br />Love it!<br />Debbie KDebbiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05450798070205006436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-49755252705834637382011-03-19T18:56:52.392-05:002011-03-19T18:56:52.392-05:00Oh Maggie Sweetie...
Now you must keep posting, yo...Oh Maggie Sweetie...<br />Now you must keep posting, you cannot leave us hanging like this.<br /><br />Between stories of your first nights working in the prison and now this story, I can't stand it anymore. <br /><br />Just send me all 25 chapters. I want to read it. Can you over night it? Ha! Ha! <br /><br />No seriously Maggie, it is great. I would so love for you to keep posting. You are a woman of many talents. You never stop amazing me.<br /><br />I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.<br /><br />Many hugs sweetie and so much love, SherryCountry Wings in Phoenixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02665526569698123576noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3190495681369643112.post-90892804777611517892011-03-19T18:46:34.609-05:002011-03-19T18:46:34.609-05:00I want more. You Go Girl!I want more. You Go Girl!Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04738934059756079283noreply@blogger.com